Reflection on Essay#1

Big Ideas

• how I read the world and interact w text
• past experiences influence me
• my process during the draft
• annotation process

1. trapped in room by internet limited to room house school
2. past teachers influence my writing and reading skills by giving a formula but one teacher open my eyes by getting me to think little harder than my other classes did distracted by the internet now my schedule has changed more work 
3. beginning I did not know what to write on because I was not sure what exercise related but I found one that connect through the long process of thinking.
4. difficult finding a quote because they all related on how you saw the world but I did not go out much

Big feelings

1. I have gotten more work and working on my ability for time management and giving myself a balance between school and personal life
2. Peers work identifies everyone is working toward their own goals that motivates me to keep having little goals to achieve
3. still learning on how to manage the work load by planner and etc. and calculating the time each subject takes along with commutes. etc.

Big actions

1. Choosing an story that was personally mine I didn't know what to write about only tow examples camp up
2. keeping up with 3 drafts was okay I thought I rationed my time well for my essay
3. I could ask for more help I have a habit of hesitating and standing up for  myself

Revision

1. `past revisions I just had grammar corrections and offering ideas  for past  I did not put in much effort
2. for peers feed back had to offer what I thought they could include in their drafts not granmar help each other
3. I felt dans feed back was really helpful and constructive, he offered new ideas that could help build my essay
4. I spent maybe 9 hours total for the essay and for the rescissions took longer cause I hd too make it sound good
5. now that I'm done with the essay I felt I could have concentrated on there vcontent and expanding on some ideas

Big results

I feel okay for this class now that the essays out of the way one less thing for me to worry about

What I learned about myself

During the formation of this essay, I had difficulty finding an experience I could write on because my interactions int her past were so limited. I had to learn how to manage my time and balance out the workload with my personal life. I found this essay was easier when I found an experience then built on it during the second draft. Since I have a habit of not asking for help I would like to work on that trait. In the past, my revisions included correcting grammar along with sharing ideas and giving constructive criticism. For my peers  feedback, I found it to be vey helpful knowing their input. Professor Dan's feedback was also helpful. He gave questions that lead me to think of how I should expand on some ideas.  When I was revising I struggled where to insert the quotes. Now that I am done with my essay I feel that it is one less thing for me to worry about. I learned I could ask for more help when I needed it.7