Ideas Draft with link to docs

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  • Childhood memories- dad work no time for family and had to focus on supporting the family motivate me to learn and thought learning was doing everything the teacher says however I resulted in little knowledge
  • audition- spent all my time thinking bout audition

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  1. Nathan TenSeptember 19, 2018 at 2:16 PM

    I think that both of these topics can make very interesting stories for an essay. If you go into a lot more detail and talk about what happened and how it has changed you to be who you are today I think that both topics can work. I would say that the childhood memories has more content and information that will help you analyze and write about yourself today. But the audition can work if you get into more details and specifics on maybe one or two parts/things that make you who you are today. In summary, I think using the Childhood memories is a more broad topic for the prompt while I think that the audition is a more specific and detailed topic for the prompt.

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