Labor Journal #12

This week, I do not think I did well except for keeping up with the book club book. I guess I would be more studious and more productive. There were times were I could have used some of my free time to be productive and work on my essay. My takeaways for the concept of revision is that it is not about summarizing but also taking the time to make edits and include or cut ideas from your draft. Also to re-evaluate who your audience is. Prior to the concept of revision, I only knew how I was taught and that was to have a peer edit and check for grammar mistakes. I learned to revise content and direct it towards a specified audience.

My revision plan:
3 HOC:
1.go over my ideas
2. check over my thesis
3.check if my ideas connect well

1MOC
1.check if I include info needed for my audience


1LOC
1.check for grammar and spelling errors

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